So since Ficlets has closed *tear*, I need a place to post what I have written. I have decided to use this place because it is my own. I will use this place until Ficly comes out. So here is the poem that I would have posted on Ficlets today,
Life Would Suck Without You
Who would have thought
That when I met you
Things would turn out
The way they have
Now it seems
That a day without you
Is incomplete
Unwritten
Even though
It has been a roller coaster
It’s been an experience
That I could only share with you
No one else
Would have stuck around
No one else
Would have said what you did
Because of you
I am stronger than ever
I won’t break
The same way I have before
So stick around some more
Because life
Would really suck
Without you
Sammy aka Blusparrow
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suggestion, say: I won't break the same way I did before,
ReplyDeleteBecause having the "you" in there is confusing to the reader, any reader who is not me and Amber and who knows that 'you' really does fit.
Just right "before" and make it better, okay!!??