Monday, February 2, 2009

Writing: Move or Stand Still

What do you do
When your stuck
Between two feelings
That drive you nuts

When your sick
Of being lonely
And not having
Someone to hold

When you don't
Just don't want
To hear the word
Wait anymore

But you just don't
You don't want to
Fail again
Hear no again

What do you do?
I am looking at you
I don't know whether
To move or stand still

2 comments:

  1. love the ending! Now move! Move! move!

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  2. PS. I think you kind of write like Sonya Sones in the book "What My Mother Doesn't Know"
    Here's an exerpt:

    Close To Midnight

    Lying in bed
    gazing up at the
    glow-in-the-dark stars
    on my ceiling,
    I'm thinking of you

    lying in bed
    gazing up at your ceiling
    maybe thinking of me
    at this very same
    moment.

    I'm thinking that
    you've never seen my stars
    glow in the dark,
    and wondering
    if you ever will.

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