Sunday, April 5, 2009

Writing: Do You See it?

Look at her
Just for that
that moment in time
do you see it?

At first it's not
Not shallowly visible
She hides it
Puts up defenses

Her eyes talk
They show her weakness
A deep longing
To see something better

They are tired
Just like her
Tired of wanting
Wanting extraordinary

When no one is looking
Her smile speaks
Speaks of dreams
Dreams of him

So look closer
Her eyes tell you
Her smile speaks
She is thinking of him

4 comments:

  1. this is really cute. i like it. it's good like all your other poems... but idk... i just really like the... hmm... mysterious almost sound it has to it

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  2. it's like she turns away and hides a shy smile! Indeed, "do you see it?"

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  3. wow! i love it!
    i think its my favorite :)

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  4. thanks guys, i just realized you all commented =)

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